The Cull - Page 27
Singring on Sept. 21, 2014
Ouch!
Saphyr lies roundly defeated…thinking back to her encounter with an Old One on the first few pages, this makes it two defeats for two - so maybe Saphyr isn't such a great Huntress after all? Or will she get a chance to redeem herself?
I always have fun drawing dramatic panels and trying to use foreshortenming to the best effect. I feel I'm still learning and can still find ways to infuse more dynamism while not becoming to ‘cartoonish’ in my drawings. There will be planty of pages to practice that in the future…
I also am quite happy with the way the blood trails describe the path of the fist through the first panel - a neat way of showing motion without motion lines and the like (if I may say so myself).
Anyway, hope you like where this story (seems to?) be going. The first chapter is almost complete now, but there is much more to be told in the chapters to come.
Singring at 1:45PM, Oct. 5, 2014
Thanks guys as always for the comments! I wish I could reply sooner, but I have a very busy day job and usually don;t get around to it until the next upload. Thanks for sticking around!
b_templar428 at 4:41PM, Sept. 29, 2014
that was a great way of doing motion, no matter how cringe worthy.
tupapayon at 6:11PM, Sept. 21, 2014
No to worry Saphyr... There's always tomorrow... The sun will come out, tomorrow, so you got to hang on until tomorrow, come what may... Wait! Not the caves... Anything but the caves...
KimLuster at 6:02PM, Sept. 21, 2014
Excellent! Fantastic job of arm-foreshortening in 1st panel! So, I wouldn't thought it could get much worse for our heroine - I was wrong! Riveting story!