my comic is awsome u lot dont know nothing about comics so sthu noobs!!!!!
just because i only make comics to take the piss out of u lot hu do this for fun :D
I'm sorry, but.. wheres the humor? The punchline? Anything? The graphics are OK, but Marios hands are transparent, which is just plain inexcusable..
Sorry to be so critical, but you have a lot of work to do here.
This comic is to early to rate it already but i give some advice.
1. Read Will's basic MS paint sprite comic Tutorial
2. Speech Ballons will improve your comic.
3. Bigger Panels
4. Grammar Fix.
5. Mario's hands is the same as the background color :(
PQ me if you made a new comic with improvements and if you want the URL to Will's tutorial.
Nintendude at 10:08AM, April 2, 2007
wait, your making this page awful just for fun?
comic preps at 1:29AM, Feb. 26, 2007
my comic is awsome u lot dont know nothing about comics so sthu noobs!!!!! just because i only make comics to take the piss out of u lot hu do this for fun :D
Emerald at 1:52PM, Feb. 8, 2007
While on the subject of graphics. Don't mix SIDESCROLLING and OVERWORLD.
BaronPedro at 8:58AM, Feb. 7, 2007
I'm sorry, but.. wheres the humor? The punchline? Anything? The graphics are OK, but Marios hands are transparent, which is just plain inexcusable.. Sorry to be so critical, but you have a lot of work to do here.
Rydel6 at 3:19AM, Feb. 7, 2007
Good luck on the next one...
Nktakumi at 3:03AM, Feb. 7, 2007
This comic is to early to rate it already but i give some advice. 1. Read Will's basic MS paint sprite comic Tutorial 2. Speech Ballons will improve your comic. 3. Bigger Panels 4. Grammar Fix. 5. Mario's hands is the same as the background color :( PQ me if you made a new comic with improvements and if you want the URL to Will's tutorial.
Emerald at 2:50AM, Feb. 7, 2007
Uhh.. No?