Ch. 1, Prt. 2, pg. 6
Tempest_Lavalle on Jan. 29, 2012
Wow…Not even back a month, and I already miss two updates *shoots self in the head, Kim Pine style* x_x
Apologies guys, no excuse except I didn't give myself enough time/room to catch myself up. And after I figure out I get featured! Holy crap! Thanks to everyone who made that happen :D I'll do my best to NOT fall behind again!
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So, I wanted Sarah and her brother to have a verbal exchange here at first, but I didn't want to take up too many pages to expose important stuff, so I gave them just a funny little visual thing they always do. And Mikey wouldn't be a good 12 year old if he didn't try to take advantage of his big sister's weakened state to try and beat her….to no avail X3.
I'm still fiddling with size and quatliy, let me know if this is ok!
EDIT: I changed it so you don't automatically go to the first page anymore XT What a pain in the patella
cdmalcolm1 at 12:05AM, Aug. 20, 2014
I can't believe how cool this comic is. Awesome work.
Empty Brooke at 8:17AM, March 7, 2012
Damn, this comic is so awesome! And I love your panel work--so intricate; makes everything flow in a really unique way. Can't wait to read more!
shastab24 at 3:19PM, Jan. 30, 2012
Tempest, I think the page works so well the way it is. Since I have a little brother (and little sister, and older brother), I didn't need their dialogue. The actions wee perfect, and I think most people with siblings would agree.
Abt_Nihil at 11:50AM, Jan. 30, 2012
Woot! Birth of a superhero!! :D I really like the lil' scene between Sarah and her brother...
LuchaCoffee at 8:41PM, Jan. 29, 2012
Spooky foreshadowing >:3
man in black at 8:03PM, Jan. 29, 2012
great page
Ozmandious at 12:54PM, Jan. 29, 2012
so is this her origin story? Reboot or flashback?
Macattack at 9:12AM, Jan. 29, 2012
I have a funny feeling this is gonna remind me of some of the accidents that happened when Wireless first got his powers... I am kind of curious though how she was planning on blowing her nose with those pipes in it. Still, so excited to see this continue :D
Banes at 8:47AM, Jan. 29, 2012
And...hmmm...is something going on with this Doctor? The last name's a mouthful...but "call me Josh?" Haven't met too many doctors who'd say that. Maybe it's just me...
Banes at 8:45AM, Jan. 29, 2012
Damn, you're an excellent artist. I notice a lot of people who draw in your style will do the outline in a LIGHTER color. Personally, I like the thin, black outline, like you do it. Oh...watch out for "then" rather than "than" in panel two!
God of War at 4:28AM, Jan. 29, 2012
Something strange is going on.