This comic seems okay so far, but here are some tips:
1. You can use special effects, but try not to use them on EVERY page, otherwise your comic will become one of those "all bang, no buck" comics that become boring real fast
2. Quit asking people to recommend your comics, if they like it, they'll recommend it themselves
3. Work on your grammar, the spelling is done quite well, and the grammar isn't that far off...
if you want any help at all, just ask, but for now...I think I'll wait a few more pages before I fave this...(don't take that the wrong way, this comic is good...but you never know.)
Majin Gohan at 10:35AM, May 4, 2008
Won't be updating because of personal stuff, but I'll jump back on the horse soon, very soon.
spitfire_hokage at 7:49PM, April 23, 2008
well..... this comic seems dead right now.....
leeuwen12 at 12:41AM, April 23, 2008
I hope not
spitfire_hokage at 4:18PM, March 7, 2008
You haven't updated since Feb. 6. Is this comic dead?
Altimas at 4:36PM, Feb. 19, 2008
This comic seems okay so far, but here are some tips: 1. You can use special effects, but try not to use them on EVERY page, otherwise your comic will become one of those "all bang, no buck" comics that become boring real fast 2. Quit asking people to recommend your comics, if they like it, they'll recommend it themselves 3. Work on your grammar, the spelling is done quite well, and the grammar isn't that far off... if you want any help at all, just ask, but for now...I think I'll wait a few more pages before I fave this...(don't take that the wrong way, this comic is good...but you never know.)
kayman at 6:43PM, Feb. 11, 2008
this is cool!
spitfire_hokage at 4:26PM, Feb. 9, 2008
fav'd
Majin Gohan at 5:45PM, Feb. 6, 2008
Lol I know.
Seelinkrun11 at 2:38PM, Feb. 6, 2008
Ohhh the last panel was epic ;)