Kings Club Chapter 9 L'eredità PG 14

AmeliaP on Oct. 15, 2019

Kings’ Club is back! Thank you for your patience!

Guys, let me know if you're comfortable with this letter size. I don't know, but a 5.5 size seems pretty small on my screen…

SORRY! EDITS for this page:

“Your father never made this information public”

“Your family was keeping some crime scene data from your fiance's death. The Club was able to access that data.”

Steve helped a lot! Thanks!

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KDog at 6:40AM, Nov. 2, 2019

Wait, she didn't kill her fiance and block it out, did she?

El Cid at 7:36AM, Oct. 25, 2019

Oof! That's pretty low, if it's true, family or no family! The font size is fine for me, though I tend to read this on a big laptop screen rather than a phone.

Jason Moon at 8:21AM, Oct. 18, 2019

*Gasp* She called him Jason ;) The expressions on her face are like an open page for how she is feeling. The anatomy of your characters always blows my mind, so realistic!

AmeliaP at 3:38PM, Oct. 22, 2019

Yeah :D It's the first time she said his name. They're closer now (less than he wants XD)

bravo1102 at 12:57AM, Oct. 16, 2019

The size works on my phone. And I always figured the death of the boyfriend was a set up. It's something her dad would do.

AmeliaP at 3:37PM, Oct. 22, 2019

And he'll never admit it XD

agentny003 at 8:37PM, Oct. 15, 2019

I can read them And welcone back by the way. Yes Cyrenna time to confront your old man face to face.

AmeliaP at 3:36PM, Oct. 22, 2019

Thank you! :D

Gunwallace at 5:59PM, Oct. 15, 2019

That second speech bubble reads odd. "Your father wasn't made public this information ... " Is that deliberate?

AmeliaP at 3:35PM, Oct. 22, 2019

Argh, that's true XD it should be "hasn't", not "wasn't".

bravo1102 at 12:55AM, Oct. 16, 2019

Read it with replacing "w" with an "h". "Your Father hasn't made this information public..."

jerrie at 5:25PM, Oct. 15, 2019

I can see the letters ok. I use a large screen though

AmeliaP at 3:34PM, Oct. 22, 2019

Me too, I use a large screen.

Kings Club Chapter 9 L'eredità PG 14

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