i really like this page. it was fun to draw and color. it was fun drawing her body shape. the hair was fun also. and i liked the lowering pan of the camera in the three panels. What catches your eye here?
what catches my eye here? How about that teasing close-up shot
of her panties so tastefully slipped in there. :) Have to say that the script is really excellent and holds me enough on it's own without the beautiful art.
i like this page myself. im afraid it may be too boring for some readers but i think it will be fine printed alongside page 3. i liked the colors and the lineart here. Again, wish I textured the grass better. But I loved drawing this pose. I love Eva's body shape. Rate this page a 4
skyangel at 1:02AM, March 11, 2011
what catches my eye here? How about that teasing close-up shot of her panties so tastefully slipped in there. :) Have to say that the script is really excellent and holds me enough on it's own without the beautiful art.
nsterken7983 at 12:11AM, Nov. 22, 2010
thank you to Genejoke and KAM for your comments and ratings.
nsterken7983 at 12:09AM, Nov. 22, 2010
i like this page myself. im afraid it may be too boring for some readers but i think it will be fine printed alongside page 3. i liked the colors and the lineart here. Again, wish I textured the grass better. But I loved drawing this pose. I love Eva's body shape. Rate this page a 4
Genejoke at 11:54AM, Sept. 18, 2010
I like the layout, very effective
plymayer at 9:24PM, Sept. 12, 2010
Nice style and coloring.
Accolade Graphics at 8:08PM, Sept. 12, 2010
This is a very light and magical comic.