How am I doing? Is colouring or art in general improving? Is the plot progressing too slow or too fast? Am I getting confusing? Let me know.

It just screams Naruto, but it's cute and relaxed. :d The plot defines itself well.

Hey…I'm curious, is it alright for me to color your pages? I'm an excellent colorer, and I have photoshop CS2.

Thanks for the compliment. And I could give you a test run, if you want to colour that badly. I'll email you a page or 2 of line art when I get the chance, then you can just send it back when you're done. Sound good?

Sure. I've gotten started already. I have to make sure to get the colors right though. XD