Excellent first couple of pages!
The artwork is assured and detailed, and the backstory unobtrusively introduced. What more could anyone want from an introductory scene?!
I would suggest toning down the glowing magic effects. They look pretty but - for me - they don't quite "fit" with the sharp linework on the rest of the art. Small niggle. Other than than everything is pretty much spot on.
Looking forward to more.
Brogan at 1:15PM, Aug. 28, 2008
Great comic you have going. Keep it up!
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DAJB at 12:44AM, June 21, 2008
Excellent first couple of pages! The artwork is assured and detailed, and the backstory unobtrusively introduced. What more could anyone want from an introductory scene?! I would suggest toning down the glowing magic effects. They look pretty but - for me - they don't quite "fit" with the sharp linework on the rest of the art. Small niggle. Other than than everything is pretty much spot on. Looking forward to more.