This is the end, I moved, and a lot of stuff happened in my life, just never got a chance to pick it back up. Someday I hope to do this story justice though. I think about it often.
Hmm - I do like it, the pacing is always nice the way you set your scenes and introduce the wider world, that dialogue is nice to see and it's also nice to see the world you create on paper - the colours to me are fine, it's not too steampunky in my opinion, when compared to gaslamp fantasy for example, it's kinda like that with a nice warm sense of wider social connections. I like it. Anyway, if it's not where you want to be to tell stories at the moment, then that's completely understandable, your working on another project at the moment and that takes it's creative efforts.
skythorn at 2:42AM, Aug. 25, 2008
Hmm - I do like it, the pacing is always nice the way you set your scenes and introduce the wider world, that dialogue is nice to see and it's also nice to see the world you create on paper - the colours to me are fine, it's not too steampunky in my opinion, when compared to gaslamp fantasy for example, it's kinda like that with a nice warm sense of wider social connections. I like it. Anyway, if it's not where you want to be to tell stories at the moment, then that's completely understandable, your working on another project at the moment and that takes it's creative efforts.
DAJB at 12:09AM, April 19, 2008
But ... but ... Gaah! Pick it up again! Now!