Greetings, all. This is my absolute first time working with sprites, done in MSpaint, so take that into account. Cliches? NO! L337 3N6LI5H? NO! Sonadow? HELL NO! By the way, Sonic sprites were ripped by Ren ‘Foxx’ Ramos.
Well... it aint bad at all. But there are some things you could improve on. First off on some of the sprites it looks like you didnt take out the background color that was inbetween things like his arm/leg (if u dont know its black for that background color). Its also kinda slow going and doesn't seem that well planned out. And finally maby u could use a more creative text style and include a few more background things (char, platforms, rings, etc). Dont get me wrong... Im not dissin this comic, those are just some helpfull things you could do to improve it and possibly make it a top rater.
Dragonbreath at 5:16AM, Dec. 9, 2006
That's *C*riticsm. Not writiscm, Elmer Fudd.
PlayerOne at 6:47PM, Nov. 3, 2006
Fine, I'll give you some constructive writiscm. STFU NOOB! But seriously, There's black around sonic. Why on earth is that there?
tailsonic at 7:16PM, Oct. 21, 2006
LOLZ!!!!!
Zaku at 5:45PM, March 28, 2006
It could use some improvements.
KevinClifford at 3:37PM, March 28, 2006
You know, you can make it so that it doesn't pick up the BG color of the sheet ... Right?
LordCommunistFox at 3:29PM, March 28, 2006
Good but make sure you don't have black voids in the sprite!
the2pacfan47 at 2:44PM, March 28, 2006
Well... it aint bad at all. But there are some things you could improve on. First off on some of the sprites it looks like you didnt take out the background color that was inbetween things like his arm/leg (if u dont know its black for that background color). Its also kinda slow going and doesn't seem that well planned out. And finally maby u could use a more creative text style and include a few more background things (char, platforms, rings, etc). Dont get me wrong... Im not dissin this comic, those are just some helpfull things you could do to improve it and possibly make it a top rater.