Page 01-The Beginning
albone on Dec. 2, 2007
Hello and welcome to my webcomic, Rival Angels. It's a story about a young woman and her journey to become a professional wrestler.
I plan to update this comic every Monday and Friday.
Please feel free to post any questions, comments or concerns.
Thanks!
Albone
katyas at 2:39PM, June 14, 2008
Heh - you know, I didn't even notice the colour change on the clothing, because I was so focused on the action and interplay. :-) I've been meaning to get over here and read this for awhile now, so I'm glad I've finally found the time! Looks great!
Mister_Spears at 10:53AM, May 7, 2008
A web comic about women's wrestling and it DOESN'T focus on the T&A that's become synonymous with the sport? Am I hallucinating here? Great job! You've definitely gained a new fan!
despicable at 6:19PM, March 27, 2008
Good interesting dialogue! Story is suspenseful and interesting! The subject matter of ladies wrestling is new and intriguing, Good concept! Good stuff!
CharleyHorse at 6:37PM, Dec. 11, 2007
Very nice side kick form!
albone at 8:51AM, Dec. 7, 2007
Thanks for the comments joeyjarin and Kyupol! Kyupol, wrestling is choreographed. :P LOL You'll find that Rival Angels isn't. Dig it!
joeyjarin at 9:19PM, Dec. 6, 2007
Very nice! Keep it up! I'll be following this :)
kyupol at 8:49PM, Dec. 6, 2007
nice coloring. (wrestlings fake though. lol)
albone at 6:08PM, Dec. 5, 2007
Ooops....yeah, there's only the two girls. I got a little too fancy with making Sabrina in a black outfit in panel 3 and then, BAM, switching ito the lighter blue. Glad you all are digging it, I can't wait to post page 2!
TheMidge28 at 5:39PM, Dec. 5, 2007
real nice first page. looking forward for more. and to DAJB...I think the girl in black is the narrator commenting on herself the blue outfit girl...am I right? It looks as though she materializes in the first 3 panels.
polo at 3:25PM, Dec. 5, 2007
This looks real good!
DAJB at 3:09PM, Dec. 5, 2007
Nicely drawn and I like the internal dialogue, too. Are there two characters on this page, though, or three (i.e. as in a tag match)? The black outfit in Panel 3 has confused me a litle ...
albone at 5:20AM, Dec. 4, 2007
Glad you're diggin it so far. Lots more to come. :D
Whirlwynd at 12:28PM, Dec. 3, 2007
Nice style. I like the monologue ^^