Hi, I'm the guy whom Color the dark Eve pages. Yes I was trying for a vintage comic coloring style. I use water color to color the pages---That something artist don't use that much.
Your coloring and dialog need work. Your phasing is sorta schoolyard bully, bad and boring.Oh why is she saying "sob", is she is in fact sobbing? Or is she calling that guy a SOB? Ok well over all the art is good, but you need to work a bit longer on the coloring of the pages. Unless you are going for vintage comic print look, if thats the case good job.
read through this first story posting...looks really cool...reminds me of the anime [i]Hellsing[/i] and the Movie [i]Underworld[/i]...the style is very refreshing since the market is so overdone with the manga-esque style...the style seems like a mesh of early Image Comics...the coloring is a little awkward and inconsistent but that can always be fixed...good job...I hope to see more coming!
Agreements with Litindir.
Sure, there are western style comics all around too but they all have their similarities. Yours is dark and action packed, and it jumps immediately into the story.
I liked this comic. It awakens some kind of nostalgia in me, possibly because it is not at all influenced by manga. And I must say the characters are all drawn in interesting and positions and poses.
cdmalcolm1 at 6:42AM, Aug. 22, 2016
Nice quick work.
Tomcomic at 10:28AM, Jan. 2, 2008
Hey .... Great artwork! Keep it going....
mstudioscomics at 10:08PM, Oct. 12, 2007
Hi, I'm the guy whom Color the dark Eve pages. Yes I was trying for a vintage comic coloring style. I use water color to color the pages---That something artist don't use that much.
Litina at 8:45PM, Oct. 11, 2007
@ultimetal I'm sure your right... but I think this comic has real potential(otherwise I would not have bothered to comment).
ultimetal at 5:06PM, Oct. 11, 2007
lol@litina Im pretty sure everyone else is handling it just fine as it is..
Litina at 3:46PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Your coloring and dialog need work. Your phasing is sorta schoolyard bully, bad and boring.Oh why is she saying "sob", is she is in fact sobbing? Or is she calling that guy a SOB? Ok well over all the art is good, but you need to work a bit longer on the coloring of the pages. Unless you are going for vintage comic print look, if thats the case good job.
Rockster1039 at 3:38PM, Oct. 11, 2007
fav'd
TheMidge28 at 2:11PM, Oct. 11, 2007
read through this first story posting...looks really cool...reminds me of the anime [i]Hellsing[/i] and the Movie [i]Underworld[/i]...the style is very refreshing since the market is so overdone with the manga-esque style...the style seems like a mesh of early Image Comics...the coloring is a little awkward and inconsistent but that can always be fixed...good job...I hope to see more coming!
ultimetal at 12:46PM, Oct. 11, 2007
Agreements with Litindir. Sure, there are western style comics all around too but they all have their similarities. Yours is dark and action packed, and it jumps immediately into the story.
Litindir at 11:36AM, Oct. 11, 2007
I liked this comic. It awakens some kind of nostalgia in me, possibly because it is not at all influenced by manga. And I must say the characters are all drawn in interesting and positions and poses.