I liked the SFX sound completes the second panel. Excellent art! I liked the story as well, but I would like it a little longer, maybe 3 or 4 pages would solve the little rushing in the plot here.
Aaaaw, and, just when I add this comic to my favorites, I found it is the end!
Storywise, this felt a little rushed at times. As if scenes of plot and character development had been skipped ...
Artwise, though, it's excellent! Well done!
AmeliaP at 7:39PM, Aug. 21, 2017
I liked the SFX sound completes the second panel. Excellent art! I liked the story as well, but I would like it a little longer, maybe 3 or 4 pages would solve the little rushing in the plot here. Aaaaw, and, just when I add this comic to my favorites, I found it is the end!
IAMCAG at 7:12PM, June 12, 2008
quality of the art is decent, just a little stiff.
DAJB at 12:31AM, May 31, 2008
Storywise, this felt a little rushed at times. As if scenes of plot and character development had been skipped ... Artwise, though, it's excellent! Well done!
Rhykker at 5:59PM, May 30, 2008
Awesome art.