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usedbooks on Oct. 30, 2014
Apparently, the higher the dialogue:panel ratio, the closer my speech bubble layout resembles a “Z.” :P
Fyi, in the photo are four of Yuki's five older brothers only because I couldn't fit the other guy in. The youngest is on the far left, just a couple years older than Yuki. Her oldest brothers are separated from her by a decade or so.
Anubis: Indeed. :P
plymayer: Trying to chase a lead to many ends.
Peipei: Too true. Bit of a beast, that guy.
usedbooks at 6:33AM, Oct. 31, 2014
Unfortunately, I fear something was lost when the lines were abridged. My original, longer script was *basically* the same but had more details. The barfly explained what made him take notice of the men. Brandon "seemed nervous" originally said "was jittery; I thought he was unstable or on drugs or something." And "carrying a folder" also included "clutching it so tightly that his knuckles were white." In my original script, barfly states that he thought some kind of confrontation was going to happen between the two men. He thought maybe it was a blackmail situation. -- Revised script lost that, but maybe it's more realistic that barfly would have noticed the details but NOT mentioned them.
Peipei at 10:44PM, Oct. 30, 2014
That guy must have a good memory to remember a guy he saw come in a week ago :s. Back when I was a waitress, I forgot what people looked like hours after serving them. :s
plymayer at 9:32PM, Oct. 30, 2014
Honestly, if some one asked me if I saw some guy in a picture last week, I'd have a hard time saying yes or no - unless something or some event to make them stand out. A scar maybe. Or wierd outfit. Or Goofy face or something. Don't think I could honestly testify on something a month or two without questioning my memory.
Anubis at 8:05AM, Oct. 30, 2014
if theres gonna be no bloodshed they why worry?